Reading level 3
The Mystery Box
Author Andrew G Taylor
On Halloween, Ben, his best friend Megan and his brother Chris are staying at home while Mum goes on a date with her new boyfriend, Jonathan DeVries. Ben is not at all keen on DeVries – he smells really weird for starters. And when the babysitter cancels, Ben really doesn't fancy spending the night with him at home. The kids assure Ben's mum they will be fine on their own, and DeVries has arranged some surprises to keep them entertained. Who doesn't like surprises? Then those surprises start to arrive...
Chapter 1 The Claw
Ben and his friend Megan insist that they will be fine at home alone with Ben's little brother Chris for Halloween. But Mum's creepy date, DeVries, has arranged some surprises for them...
- Chapter 2 Claw and Disorder
With the Claw of Vlad on a rampage, Ben, Megan and Chris are beginning to realise that the Halloween surprises might not be as lame as they previously thought. In fact, they could be lethal!
- Chapter 3 What Has No Legs and Likes to Eat You?
The second box has arrived and things are not looking any better for Ben, Megan and Chris. With the house more or less destroyed and their lives in danger, how can they meet this terrifying challenge?
- Chapter 4 Macaque Attack
Ben, Megan and Chris start to find answers, and they are ready to confront their third task. It doesn't seem too bad... at first... and then it all gets very confusing. Watch out for the monkeys!
- Chapter 5 Back and Fourth
The fourth challenge is looming, but where and when are Ben, Megan and Chris? Will they be able to beat the final test and win the Time Blade? And who can they trust to help them?
The story is very clear and the timeline is very clean. It's not hard to follow. But the characters could be more elaborate to make it more interesting, and maybe add some mystery a the end, stories with a definite closure are less satisfactory. As a conclusion, I quite enjoyed it, and I give my congratulations to the author.famat 17 October 2019, 09:28 p.m.
I think this book was great, it had a great plot and the main characters were very well designed. They had a really interesting evolution during the different chapters. When it comes to creating mystery and expectation, the author does it quite well, I found it easy to keep on reading chapter after chapter. Congratulations to the author!SuperGranota 18 October 2019, 10:33 a.m.
The end of the book was very surprising. I enjoy it a lot. Have you ever though in writing a second part of the mystery box? It would be amazing!
I have found this fiction express book very interesting. The story and the characters where very surprising. The story and the different challenges that the characters face are really fun and exciting. I congratulate you for the book, I liked it a lot and hopefully find another story like that on the platform.
I don't know if you are a professional writer but, in my opinion, you write very well and you have a lot of imagination.
Best regards and good luckPepePalos 18 October 2019, 10:34 a.m.
- Chapter 2 Claw and Disorder